Great Pictures

March 7th, 2010

Check out the amazing pictures Sheila Crosby made of a small church on the island where she lives. She has them on her blog.   Look for the March 4 entry

Interview with Manda Benson

March 5th, 2010
1) Can you give us a brief bio?
I’m an ex-research scientist living in the Midlands of England. I’ve worked in areas of chemical research as diverse as drugs design, genetic engineering, biofuels, organic synthesis, and polymers. I’ve dabbled with teaching science, mainly at secondary and undergraduate level.
2) When did the writing bug bite and in what genre(s)?Manda
I’ve always written, for as long as I can remember. I even remember writing when I hadn’t been taught to write. Of course, no-one else could read it back then. When I started school I used to have an old black diary given to me by my grandfather, which I carried everywhere and wrote stories in. I also remember doing an illustrated series of stories about a werewolf and his friends living in a castle, using felt pens and A4 paper folded in half, and making audio stories with a cassette player. And I used to brew revolting potions in the garage and test them on my toys. So I guess I’ve always been a writer and a chemist.
3) When you started writing, what goals did you want to accomplish?  Is there a message you wanted readers to grasp?
I think initially I just wanted to make something coherent and permanent out of the ideas I had. Later on, I wanted to show science from an honest and balanced perspective. Some science is controversial, and with disciplines like genetic engineering there are unfortunately a lot of extreme opinions being expressed very vociferously by people who don’t understand the facts, and extreme organisations often target propaganda at teenagers. I want to write fiction that shows controversial science used for both good and bad. I want readers to make their own opinion on how far is too far, but I want it to be a balanced opinion they can understand other points of view from.
4) Briefly, tell us about your books.
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Dark Tempest is a science-fiction romance recently published in electronic formatby Lyrical Press. I have a YA novel and some kids’ books  I’m currently trying to sell and some other works in  progress. I also have a serial satire with illustrations, HyperGolf, that is published on my website.
5) What’s the hook for Dark Tempest?
It’s set about 4,000 years in the future when the human race has become separated into a genetic elite and a genetic underclass. It’s the story of a taboo relationship that develops between a high-caste woman and a low-caste man who are both in peril for reasons they don’t at first understand.
6) How do you develop characters?  Settings?
With characters, the point they start from seems to be quite variable and hard to pin down. Sometimes I invent them entirely consciously for a particular purpose that a plot requires. Sometimes they come into my mind, made from bits and ends of real people, of their own volition. I rely on psychology theories a lot and use a Myers-Briggs personality type test to define the sorts of people my characters are, and when I’m writing a novel I write a biography a few pages long for each character’s history, and I draw a ‘personality tree’ that shows how different character attributes (such as ‘determined’ and ‘inquisitive’) interact in the person’s psyche. With settings, I am most often inspired by real places, or sometimes places in dreams.
7) What’s the most unusual/most likable character?
The kind of characters I usually like best are, well, shall we say, rough diamonds. I like antiheroes with more flaws than qualities!
8 ) Do you have specific techniques to help you maintain the course of the plot?
I need to let ideas stew, for anything from a month to over a year. I try to plan out the plot as much as I can before I start writing. The way I see it, a novel has three stages: mystery, revelation, action. I need to set up the mystery and how it’s resolved before I set fingers to keys, and I need to know where the book is going to end, but it’s unusual for me to know exactly how the action that gets the book from the revelation to the end is going to pan out before I write the first parts. I think this comes from the characters as they grow and change under the influence of the plot, and these ideas all come to me as I write the first part.
9) Do you have a specific writing style?  Preferred POV?
I think third person limited should be the default PoV to use, and usually it’s the best choice. However, I’ve written a few things that just needed to be in either third person omniscient or first person narrative. It really depends on the story the writer is trying to tell and the writer’s motive in telling it as to what’s the ideal PoV.
10) Have you used your drawing skills in your writing before?
Yes, I’ve done a few illustrated things. I have a children’s book that I’ve not yet sold with black-and-white drawings, and I also publish episodes of HyperGolf on my website with colour cartoons.
11) What’s HyperGolf about?
Label5 It’s a series of satirical  science-fiction episodes about  some people playing a game of  high-tech golf on a course that  runs the length and breadth of  the galaxy. Each episode stands alone and more are uploaded as and when I get round to them. It’s free to read! I decided to do it because I didn’t want to run a blog, but I wanted something fun and entertaining that people could come to the site to read.
12) What are your current projects?
I’m working on the first volume of a new SF trilogy I call Beasts. I’m also writing a novella in the same setting as Dark Tempest, and a crime/romance novel, which is a slight departure from my usual SF purism, although only a hair’s breadth away from a technothriller.
13) Where can folks learn more about your books and events?
At my website, http://tangentrine.com
14) What type of writing do you do?
Science fiction and science fiction and science fiction – mainly technothrillers and hard SF. I’m a genre bender so I often combine it with humour, romance, or horror.
15) What is the best thing about writing?
When I get really bogged down in Chapter X and the ideas start flowing, I forget the practicalities and annoying realities of my real life, and live for a bit as a character solving a mystery or going on an adventure in an engrossing world that’s less constrained and more exciting!
16) Is there a specific time of day that you write?
Unfortunately, usually after midnight. That’s just the way the muse seems to go.
17) What is the most interesting book you ever read?
To be honest, it was probably a science textbook. There are endless mines of plot ideas you can get from reality.
18) Favorite authors?
My absolute favourite writer is HG Wells. I also love Jerome K Jerome’s Three Men in a Boat and Daphne Du Maurier’s Rebecca. Books that influenced me as a child were Tom’s Midnight Garden by Philippa Pearce, Marianne Dreams by Catherine Storr, and The Demon Headmaster by Gillian Cross. More modern SF writers I’ve enjoyed are Wil McCarthy and Peter F Hamilton. Hank Quense is pretty cool too – check out his new novel and his anthology!
19) Any parting words of advice for writers?
Write. Keep writing. Submit. Keep submitting. Avoid redundancy.

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Build a Better Story

March 1st, 2010

Build a Better Story is now available in ebook format. It replaces the previous version Get it in Gear.  The new version has 67% more material.  Its focus is on providing a method of organizing the thoughts and story elements in a way that simplifies writing the first draft.

An artist doesn’t start slopping paint on a blank canvas the instant she gets an idea for a new painting.  She sketches the ideas on
paper and then prepares the canvas.  So too, an author has to sketch out the story ideas and prepare the ‘canvas’ before setting out to write the first draft.  Build a Better Story shows you how to do that.

Build a Better Story received five stars from Readers Favorites.

Check it out here!

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Show, Don’t Tell

February 26th, 2010

This is a writing maxim that often surfaces in critiques.  Many inexperienced writers carry the show to extremes.  Having seen the “show don’t tell” admonition in every book on fiction writing, they assume that every instance of telling is wrong.  The reality is that every story is a combination of showing and telling. BABS coverWhile showing is a must for action scenes, telling is useful for compressing time and space.  Description is usually telling.  So is all exposition.  Both description and exposition are necessary ingredients in every story.  Taking the SDT principle to its extreme usage, the story will degenerate into a series of trivial actions.  A few simple examples will clarify this issue:

Telling:

Janet took a shower.

Showing:

Janet went into the bathroom, stripped, turned on the water and adjusted the temperature.  She stepped in and allowed the water to flow over her body and hair.  She squeezed shampoo into her hand and washed her hair . . . This is showing, but to what purpose?  What reader will want to be ’shown’ Janet taking the shower when there are more important and interesting events waiting to be revealed.  The telling took four words.  The showing took thirty-eight and counting.  While the longer example satisfies the SDT rule, it is dull.

As you can see from the example, telling advances the story without bogging it down in trivia.

This brief essay is taken from my Build a Better Story ebook on fiction writing.  It’s scheduled to be released in March, 2010.

Baked Cod with Roasted Potatoes and Onions

February 22nd, 2010

Description:  A variation on fish and chips

Serves: 2-3

Time: one hour

Ingredients:

4 potatoes
Cooking spray
Cooking oil
¾ teaspoon paprika

large onion
cup plain dry bread crumbs
Black pepper to taste
1 pound cod in one or more pieces

Preparation:

Preheat oven to 450 degrees
Spray a glass baking pan with nonstick cooking spray
Peel and cut potatoes in half lengthwise, then cut halves into small wedges
Slice and then coarsely chop the onion
Place potato wedges and onion in a bowl and toss with black pepper, ¼ teaspoon paprika, and 1 teaspoon of oil
Place in a single layer in baking pan and cook for 30 minutes or until the potatoes are almost done. Remove baking dish, leave oven on
Combine bread crumbs, pepper and ½ teaspoon paprika in bowl
With a fork, stir in 1 tablespoon of oil, blending until crumbs are evenly moistened.
Press fish into bread crumbs on both sides
Place fish in baking dish after pushing potatoes aside
Bake 12 minutes or until fish and potatoes are done

Notes:

Serve with malt vinegar

Substitute any firm white fish such as halibut or hake.

If you want to add some heat, throw in a dash of cayenne pepper with the paprika and to the bread crumbs

New Interview

February 17th, 2010

Today I was interviewed by Susan Whitfield on her blog.  We talked  about Fool’s Gold and my writing projects.

You can catch it here.

New Story Published

February 16th, 2010

Afterburner SF just published a short story if mine.  Go here to read GS Midden.

An unusual day

February 14th, 2010

My wife and I generally watch some of our grandkids for a few hours one or twice a week.  Yesterday (Friday) was quite different.  I picked up two of them, Jenni age 4 and Sean age 2, at one o’clock.  Both parents were at work and their sitter had to leave to attend her college classes.  At five, another pair of kids got dropped off: Anna age 8 and Will age 6.  Part of the deal was I’d cook dinner for all of them.  Jenni and Sean ate chicken nuggets and alphabits (a pasta dish shaped like letters).  Will had a cheeseburger (without a roll) and popcorn chicken (different than the nuggets).  Anna ate popcorn chicken and thin egg noodles.  Around six, the father of Jenni and Sean showed up with another kid: Tom age 7.  Tom ate alphabits and popcorn chicken (cooked fresh) while his father had a hamburger.  I also steamed broccoli. It’s the only green thing the kids will eat; even then it has to be slathered with melted butter or margarine.  Eating broccoli always involves a lot of whining.

After all that, I cooked more hamburgers for my wife and I. All this activity took place in less than an hour.

Now I know what a short-order cooks go through and I don’t envy them their jobs.

Fool’s Gold Interview

February 10th, 2010
On 2/10/10 I had an interview with Nanci Arvizu on Blog Talk Radio to discuss

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my novel Fool’s Gold.  You can listen or download it to hear later at this site or click on the link below

Lottery winner assumes post of mayor in Camton, NJ

February 7th, 2010

(Hanque Faux News Network)

Marcus Blair, the bus driver in Campton who won the first mayoral lottery last month, was sworn in as the mayor of this troubled New Jersey city.  Hoping to eliminate the graft and corruption associated with entrenched politicians, the state instituted a special lottery to determine the next mayor of the city.  Open to all citizens in the county, half of revenue from the ten dollar ticket will go into the coffers of the city. Blair will remain in office for eighteen months and will be replaced by the next lottery winner.

Blair, right after the swearing-in ceremony was over, appointed his eight siblings to deputy mayor jobs at undisclosed salaries.

In his first press conference he said, “I almost had a heart attack when I found out how big the city budget is. I thought I got to spend all that money, but the budget director straightened me out.”

Blair went on to say he would continue to pay union dues just in case his new job doesn’t work out.  He also said that prior to leaving office, he planned to appoint himself to an executive position with the transit authority.

A spokesman for the State Lottery Commission said in telephone interview, “We don’t see how the lottery can produce worse politicians than elections did. In effect, people voted with their ten dollar bills rather than with a ballot.”